Wednesday, 1 June 2011

SHORT & NOT VERY SWEET.

On a good day,
She would describe
herself
as
a woman who'd had
many lovers.

On a bad day,
She would count you
as
one
of
them

7 comments:

  1. Ha! Penny you made me smile.
    xoxo Kim

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  2. So few words, so much meaning, Penny! Fantastic!

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  3. Uh! Ok! Love your wordsmithing. Thanks for stopping by my blog and leaving a comment. I am visiting to read some of your poetry.

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  4. You've said so much in not that many words!
    You know dear Pen...I was reminded today that a female swan is called a Pen (seems I must have known that at one time LOL)
    I thought that was sweet...you know how fond I am of swans :)
    I appreciate your sweet visits to my Magpie's Nest SO much...thank you!
    oxo

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  5. Wow, so much in so few words, and so profound!
    Thanks for visiting and leaving all your kind comments, Pen.

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