On the steps of the zoo
you told me,
as I nustled against you,
that you
Do Not do
Public Displays of Affection.
‘You’ll learn’, I told you,
optimistically.
I should have listened.
The arctic wolves
had warmer
hearts
I
found.
I will hold your hand
Only in Private
you later said.
I will hold yours
everywhere
I replied,
eyes misty with
love.
But you were right.
Hands were for smoking,
tricks using matches
and clutching glasses
but, never for
holding or
for tenderly
stroking,
I later
grew
to
understand.
You needed
coaxing
gently
from
out of
your
tightly buttoned
defensive position.
But, I
grew
weary
of
tediously tunnelling
under your
barricades.
And now?
Now,
you are back
in
your
dugout.
Your sniper’s eye
trained on
the horizon
seeking out
the
potential
dangers
of
intimacy.
Sad piece, and so true that some relationships just aren't in tune.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, Penny.
xx
Great writing, so sad! xx
ReplyDeleteOh! I don't know what to say. I feel sad for something lost. I hope there is a happiness to be found somewhere else. Hugs.
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Carolyn ♥
lovely to meet you penny and thank you for the comment. will get a cuppa and catch up with your blog
ReplyDeleteThose words are very moving.
ReplyDeleteDid you write them?
I just popped over to say thank you for your kind comment.
Take care
Sue xx
Powerful piece, Penny! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteoh, this is so sad and moving, and beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your very kind comment on my blog. I am eager to look around your space now.
Daniele
what a fantastic poet you are..marvellous succinct writing
ReplyDeleteVery honest and beautiful writing, Penny! Thank you for stopping by my doves post...
ReplyDeleteI love the way you write Penny.
ReplyDeleteHappy Easter love from a fellow Penny xx
Sad yet so beautiful.
ReplyDeletewhat a striking words penny!! so sad.
ReplyDeletethanks for your nice comment on my blog.
Aww what a shame they are both not on the same wavelength!
ReplyDeleteAnother well written Poem, you have a fantastic way with words Penny!
Jan x
Oh wow, so sad and forceful, Pen!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written and oh so true. My siblings and I knew that our father loved us dearly but he could never show it outwardly and, to a certain extent, he passed this inhibition on to us. I find hugging and kissing extremely embarrassing and I avoid it like the plague. I understand now that my father was an orphan when both parents died leaving him to be brought up, from age eight, by a strict grandfather who showed no affection. This "curse" has passed through each generation.
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